becoming | a visual poetry
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Published 2021-01-22
"The wisp sings" - Winter Aid
• Winter Aid - The Wisp Sings
The wind knew its direction,
The river knew its flow
I so envied their way of knowing.
In doing that,
I forgot the rhythm of my own becoming
The life I so gently cradled
Looks back at me poignantly.
It wants so much from me.
And I have too little to give.
Too little to say.
Bitterness and sweetness
I took a spoonful of each
And I mixed them with my hurt
I gulped it down with a smile
And I went on about my day.
For the wind carries me with it
And the river runs deeper within me.
All Comments (21)
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Finding this channel has been one of the best things that have happened to me so far this year. Beautiful.
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The amount of work you put into your videos definitely shows. The visuals are absolutely stunning!
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Bitterness and sweetness, I took a spoonful of each. ❤❤. You presented that so beautifully. ❤❤.
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So crisp and calm!
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One of your best poems yet! Love it so much!
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This poem was so beautiful. It went right through my heart.
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This is so beautiful. Winter Aid's music is 💯
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im in love, this is so esthetic and peaceful 😌🤍
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This is Soo beautiful! Made me cry..
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So well put together, the visuals and the poem compliment each other perfectly!
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I love you Ramuna❤️ I love your ideas. Your creativity! You're so good at it❤️
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This is so beautiful ❤️ Your channel brings me so much inspiration!
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the opening lines gave me goosebumps. I felt like I heard something I've been meaning to say for a long time. soo beautiful :)
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Beautiful! ❤️
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i usually do visual poetry in the toilet
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You only keep getting better and better at what you do Rams ❤️❤️
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Underrated
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😍😍😍😍😍so soothing
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aesthetic 🌱
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❤❤🍒🍒